Score: 7

"Funny"

submission: Portal: Cube Love

date: February 20, 2008

Quite funny! I didnt like the 300 bit as much as the beginning though, unlike most people who have reviewed :/
I thought you used Gladys voice quite well! and i liked the expressions on the guy a lot, made me laugh. Definitely could use some work on the graphics though. thats the reason i didnt give u a 10. Do a more animated sequel please!

Score: 0

"yuk"

submission: pl@ne gets dumped

date: February 18, 2008

Bad animation, bad sound quality, bad choice of song (imo), no plot, and the strobe thing was reaaaaallly annoying.

Score: 4

"wtf?"

submission: Two Guys Ep. 4

date: February 18, 2008

Well it didnt really make any sense. The jokes werent really funny. But i do like your style of animation mostly. (couldnt see the arms on the guys but other than that it was pretty good). I think you need a better plot, and you definitely need to shorten the toad licking, perhaps you could show him form different angles if you dont want to just cut it down. Sound was decent. Keep working.

Score: 9

"Beautiful!"

submission: Nim's Winter tale

date: February 7, 2008

I loved it! Excellent animation, so many uses of graohics in ways that I havnt seen anywhere else. Everything was lifelike except the pixie though...it kind of made him feel too simple. I like that you added physics to it, like the lantern swinging. I agree with some earlier comments, very pretty sky at the end. The story felt a bit slow, needs somethign more to make you think at the beginning. I liked it a lot though, hope to see more!

Score: 9

"Loved it!"

submission: .<3

date: February 5, 2008

I loved it! Great music, good story, stylish animation. Work on the hands a bit. Could use some shading to make it more in depth like the others have commented. But I really liked it! Just practice your drawing and you'll get my 10's!
By the way don't worry about people who don't like "emo" style, cause some beautifully meaningful work can come from those storylines.

Score: 7

"meh"

submission: Arkzones' painting Method

date: February 5, 2008

it was a competent tutorial/ teaching method. Yes you need somewhat of a background in flash, but if you know what he pointed out you need to know at the beginning you should be fine. The reason i didn't give it a higher score is the english (just cause you cant spell well doesn't mean you cant have someone check it) and the fact i didn't like how complicated your actual style was. I think that this style could only be used an fairly simple animations, not lifelike ones, so it is fairly limited. I do like your teaching style though, and would like to see more tutorials by you. Perhaps on something a little more complicated than shading.

Score: 9

"Nice"

submission: Animation tutorial

date: February 5, 2008

I liked it, it was fairly simple and straight forward. As said before, the circles were a bit confusing, maybe you should have used the legs instead to show how they go faster at the front so need less frames at the front. English was pretty good, jsut get someone to read them before you submit :P

I think you shouldve helped a bit more with the keyframe positions, like how far apart they should be and how closely that relates to movement. just a bit more explanation for that bit
Overall very good, has helped me start my FBF drawings! Thanks!

Score: 7

"nice style"

submission: Stiw Kit: Episode 1

date: February 1, 2008

Nice style of graphics, sound was good, story was going great and i woulda liked the moral and joke except that it was toilet humour...yay. sorry i just don;t go in for that. But excellent animation, I hope ur next one is just as good without the potty stuff :P

Score: 7

"hehe"

submission: Inclines¹³

date: February 1, 2008

i liked it, it was short and funny, and the balls seemed almost too random for the stick figures to out run! Smooth movement for all objects, very nice. good choice of music. Id like to see an interactive one :P

Score: 10

"Lovely"

submission: Vivaldi: Spring Mvt. 1

date: February 1, 2008

I thought this was a very creative, cute and stylish clip to a famously loved piece of music. Well done! The only thing i would like to see improved are the birds movements from still to flying, or from in the air to the ground at the stream. they were a bit jerky. Id like to see more!